Absolutely not if you want band 9. You must use natural language, not phrases and sentences you have learned from an academic writing website or book. Never learn sentences to put in your essay. Each essay is written uniquely depending on the topic. Any learned sentences are not counted by IELTS. I strongly suggest you get at least one of my advanced lessons in writing task 2 so you understand not only the techniques but what IELTS is all about in terms of how it functions as a language test: http:///IELTSLizStore
As the keyholder, you are in the prime position to effect positive change in all areas of your love and your life. You know what is best for your household, your man, and yourself. Women have the power to use their intellect to control their man's orgasms, men, however, do not. They cannot, because their base instincts will, in the words of one keyholder, "cause them to abandon their own intellect in favor of following their "idiot stick."" She further adds, "Strict control of the male orgasm will greatly improve the life of the female who is willing to exercise that control, it will also however serve to improve her male's life as she uses her intellect to overrule his "idiot stick."" To paraphrase, if you could enhance the quality of life for yourself and your man, with the simple turn of a key, why not?