Thanks for your advices and I will try in my later essays. I am worried about my next ILETS exam, especially writing and speaking. In fact, I only get a score of in the writing part just half a month ago. I think there are several reasons. First, I spent too much time on the TASK 1(around half an hour), I do not have enough time to think over the topic of task 2(I always need 50 min’s to finish it ) . Second, my handwriting is really ugly (I can not change it in a short time). Third,I always make too many small mistakes( wrong forum or wrong spelling of the vocabulary) I plan to write task1 and task2 per essay in the next month ,hope I can at least get 6 in writing and speaking.